Teen Female/Teen Female

This story is fiction, but with some of my own real experience in it! Hope you like it (: My name is Lara. I knew Ellen since we were little. We lived in the same apartment building, our parents were friends and it seemed natural that we hang out together, too. I am 3 years older but we never really bothered, and we became really good friends. Now I'm 19 and Ellen is 16. I live in my own flat now and Ellen still lives with her parents. She comes to visit me sometimes, or I come to visit her. Here...

Note: I studied like hell for this chapter trying to get into the female mind, so let me know how I did. Its the longest ever at 35 pages, women show their feelings more than men so I had to write accordingly. The story is in the view of Rita, this way you can see all her emotions and stuff, and there is a section where the view is from the mom, so you can see how her cunning mind works. It did take me a while to write this, but thats because I was working on other stories. I will...

In this part I have changed my writhing style. PS I would love to know who your fave girl so please comment is. ‘Knock’ ‘Knock’ ‘Knock’ John woke with a start for an instant forgetting where he was. Then he heard it again. ‘Knock’ ‘Knock’ ‘Knock’ but this time it was accompanied by a sweet and salty voice, “room service”. It was Rose. John pulled the covers off of his head in time to see her opening the in her maid outfit with a tray of pancakes and syrup. Seeing that john was up Rose gave one of her tantalizing smiles...